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Today technological advancement has a positive impact on society

 

           In today's society, it is widely believed that technology advancement has a negative impact. Some people advocated that technology distroy relationships among people. While people can manage lots of works by themselves, they no more feel necessities of cooperation. However I disagree with this view. I firmly believed that advancement of technology has a benefit on society. This is because it is educational and it make people's lives efficiently.

           First of all, advancement of technology include educational process, so it is helpful in aspect of education. To be specific, technology allow people have more knowledge with less time spending. Today's students can learn animals figures with 3D video and they can see landscape of deep in the sea without any travels. It definitely help students broaden their perspective and it would help when they work as a part of society. For instance, when my father was young, he did not have any change to see abroad. He said that my father and his generation had to spend several days to see other regions and to study the geography there. However, I and my generation only need few minutes to access internet. When we are searching internet, we can take professional reports not only  geology but also historical and climate study. Through this experiments, it is legitimated to say that technology advancements is beneficial for society.

           In addition, technological advancement makes people's lives efficiently. In other word, advanced technology allow people save their time and money, People can more works within a shorter time span. It gives people more extra time which can be spent to people's relaxing. It result in // higher efficient when people do their tasks in their field. As a result, technological advancements give a positive cycle on today's society. According to the survey done by the New York Times, 89 percents of people believed that technology saves their time. The result shows that people who was attended this survey believed that they could save from 4 to 5 hours a day after inventing internet, automatic operations of machineries and people spent their extra time for enjoying leisure. They answered that it is helpful to focus on their work on their working hours. Through this experiment, society has been a positive effect from technological advancement.

           In conclusion, I believe that technology gives positive impacts to society. First, advanced technology include educational process and it allow people their efficient life.